Chaoszerom's Reviews

[HeroSmash Trailer]

Nice!

Your animation is smooth, the style seems to fit, other than what seems to be a bit too much manical laughter, the sound effects aren't half bad either. The gags are solid, not too much out of place, the only odd thing is the random chick that appears halfway through for one second.

The only real way that this could be better is with a launcher, the infinite loop thing was starting to bug me as i wrote this :P

[CSI: Minecraft]

Ignyte, go to the link posted by Falconer

That glasses, awful joke, YYYEEEEAAAAHHH!! thing is a common internet meme, based off of, you guessed it, CSI. As far as I'm aware. the link gives an example of that.

Also: Looks like that guy...
*puts on glasses*
...had a short fuse
YYYYEEEEEAAAAAHHHH!!!!

Falconer02 responds:

*claps*

[Bieber Ragdol v2]

Eh, alright

The idea is cool - I agree wholeheartedly with Bieber haters - but the implimentation irks me for several reasons:

1) Only damage to the midriff area is counted, so no headshots, etc. That seems a
bit buggy.

2) Lack of much to do. There are 5 tools, so not very many. If you did something similar to the system of Interactive Buddy, wherein damage points earn you money to spend on better weapons, that might help, but don't just use that, think of something unique.

3) Music. At the very start, there is a horrible screeching, which I assume is supposed to be a parody of Bieber's voice, and fortunatly that only goes on for a few seconds. After that, though, is nothing, which is really disconcerting. Maybe head on over to the Audio Portal and pick something out?

~Chaos

[Spacetime]

Nice. The second part of the melody intro'd at around 1:30 was a bit iffy, where it went out of tune, but otherwise, a cool song

MisterJayElectro responds:

Had a problem there; when I would try to put it in tune, it sounded worse. I have no idea how I managed that.

Thanks for the review!

[Lava Surfer]

Not bad at all. I winced a little when I heard the Acid preset, but I can't talk :P Perhaps a piano instead? Seemed too synthy, and some parts drowned out others.

Whatever the problems with the instruments, the melodies themselves were awesome. Good job

DjScorch responds:

Thanks! Really appreciate the comment! And yeah i have had a few people tell me that acid part is a little too high so ill probably edit that when i go back and relook at it. And ill see what i can do about the drowning out. Not exactly sure how I'm gonna fix it but thats for telling me what you thought about it!

-DjScorch

[Fluid motion]

Not bad, not bad at all. Lacks a bit of variation, but that's also what makes it good. The drums sound a bit muted, but again, in some ways that's part of the style. I'd probably try make the piano a bigger part, but otherwise, great job!

NuclearPositron responds:

The variation was intentional, the 'muted' drums not really. But I think they worrk out pretty nice. Thanks for the review!